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Sketch that I just slapped some color on.

Tumblr is being a butt, and won't let me up load it D:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Okay so this is the critique box thing? Let's give this a go.

I think this is absolutely stunning. The shading, the color... There's such an intensity and power in it. Everything looks great except for the right arm. It looks a bit off. The forearm seems too short/not angled enough, or maybe the wristband is too long. Then, maybe because of one of those said things, the hand looks a little too large.

All in all though, this is amazingly beautiful. I positively love the colors, brushes and textures you used in this piece. It's so mesmerizing and piercing - it just captures my attention right away. I could stare at it forever, and honestly writing this critique is taking way longer because I keep looking up at it.

So, on a grading scale 1-100, I'd give this a 93.

I hope I was helpful! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>